His Dying Bride (the razor on life's beach) (mel_b666) wrote in fallen_souls,
His Dying Bride (the razor on life's beach)
mel_b666
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New Wannabe Poet

Hey I'm new, my name's Melanie, but you can call me Mel, if you like. I'm really just looking for a place to let out my feelings (people round here don't believe in depression) and maybe someone to talk to. Like a pan-pal...only with e-mails...
I tried my hand at some poetry. I've never actually tried to write poetry before, preffering to take out my anger and stuff in less... productice ways, but I thought I'd give it a go. Tell me if I should just give up.

I remembered doing some kind of poem like this when I was much, much younger in school about "sunshine" or something. Just thought I'd make my own version.
The Reaper calls
He wants me dead, or worse
Eternity alone, I could choose, or I could join him. Should I
Refuse him? Why, when he could bring an
End to my torure?
A salvation in my darkest time?
Press the blade to my skin as tears fill my
Eyes. I don't want to die, I just want a
Release. A release from this cold,
Cruel world.
A light in this dark
Land. I just want to be
Loved and to love in return.
Sadly, the Reaper is my only love.
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